Feedback on my first video

[WardenVFX]

This is my first video, if possible could anyone please check it out and see what I should add to make it better?

 

[Sky.]

Stop shaking your head in the recording, I also think it's too quick you're not really explaining, your more or less just doing it.
You should also get rid of that patronising music at the start. It just doesn't fit with your video.
I also think you should cut out bits where you get stuff wrong.

I'll admit its an amazing start but you have a long way to go kiddo

I loved the video. it was amazing.

Good luck on your MC journey and good luck creating.

 

[WardenVFX]

Stop shaking your head in the recording, I also think it's too quick you're not really explaining, your more or less just doing it.
You should also get rid of that patronising music at the start. It just doesn't fit with your video.
I also think you should cut out bits where you get stuff wrong.

I'll admit its an amazing start but you have a long way to go kiddo

I loved the video. it was amazing.

Good luck on your MC journey and good luck creating.

Thank you, will do!