Feedback on my graphic art?

[desu]

 

[desu]

One of the first times ive tried going with 3D art please lemme know what you think.

 

[reachforheaven]

Pretty cool, I think a more consistent colour palette would be good, like just black and white. Also the E is pretty hidden behind the other letters, maybe space it out or bring the E to the foreground.

Also I think the formatting is broken, I had to inspect the page to get the link.