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plain white letters and a green background...
my recommendation is to change the background to a slight gradient, or maybe something more cloudy, to give it a bit more variation. And reduce the saturation and lightness a bit.

and reduce the contrast on the background picture. Put a tad more space between the letters, and give them a slight color variation as well.
 

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plain white letters and a green background...
my recommendation is to change the background to a slight gradient, or maybe something more cloudy, to give it a bit more variation. And reduce the saturation and lightness a bit.

and reduce the contrast on the background picture. Put a tad more space between the letters, and give them a slight color variation as well.
Okay, thanks :)
 
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Make the letters look 3D and also add color to the letters instead of plain white :)
 

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It seems a little bland to me. The screenshot is good, it's just too bright and small. If it was bigger, more high quality, and less washed out I think it would look good! And I would suggest a different font for the lettering. Something more unique, unless you purposefully wanted to use the meme font. Maybe some effects on the letters as well!

Good luck!
 

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Make it more visible, use color contrast and stuff(you should've learnt this in school :p), maybe some editing on the letters to make them more unique and not just a plain font. And make the background a little more faded where the text it but then casually more visible when you move away from the text. Also maybe add some shading effects to the text. Otherwise it looks good, if you need any help pm me :)

Thanks,
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Make it more visible, use color contrast and stuff(you should've learnt this in school :p), maybe some editing on the letters to make them more unique and not just a plain font. And make the background a little more faded where the text it but then casually more visible when you move away from the text. Also maybe add some shading effects to the text. Otherwise it looks good, if you need any help pm me :)

Thanks,
Bill
its surprising how little schools go into visual things like color and saturation
 
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