Feedback on my new Youtube series

[Luigical]

Hey guys,
I recently started posting the Minecraft news every week. I just released the second episode, I am looking for feedback on the episode. If you want to watch it and give me feedback on how to improve I would really appreciate it.

 

[VactumPlays]

Great commentary, although I think the actual video production could do a lot of improvements.
I mostly wanted to point out the intro, those reply mod shaders scenes are nice and all, but just not engaging.

The intro would really benifit from a variety of scenes that represent each news topic.
I think it would be worth the effort to do so, as the intro is the most important part, it's what makes people determine if they want to stay to watch your video or not.

 

[Luigical]

Great commentary, although I think the actual video production could do a lot of improvements.
I mostly wanted to point out the intro, those reply mod shaders scenes are nice and all, but just not engaging.

The intro would really benifit from a variety of scenes that represent each news topic.
I think it would be worth the effort to do so, as the intro is the most important part, it's what makes people determine if they want to stay to watch your video or not.

I hadn't thought of that. Pretty good idea! But I go through the topics Pretty quick, it would only be like a 3 second clip, am I understanding you correctly?

 

[VactumPlays]

I hadn't thought of that. Pretty good idea! But I go through the topics Pretty quick, it would only be like a 3 second clip, am I understanding you correctly?

I recommend looking at tbnr frags aka prestons Minecraft Videos, where it is super fast transitioning intros
If done right, you can make it not get dizzying, but if done wrong you'll just make it dizzying for the audience.

Here's a good example of a super engaging intro:

 

[Luigical]

I recommend looking at tbnr frags aka prestons Minecraft Videos, where it is super fast transitioning intros
If done right, you can make it not get dizzying, but if done wrong you'll just make it dizzying for the audience.

Here's a good example of a super engaging intro:

I will take a look once I'm home, thanks for the suggestion!

 

[Function]

Looks great!

Keep up the great work, you earned yourself a subscriber.

 

[davetuck98]

Liked your video. In general, it's pretty decent. May be some sound mic improvements could be good: microphone replacement, sound card change, possibly additional foam around the mic. I also noticed some lags compared to similar videos, perhaps this is due to the settings of the source video, or size. Looks like you've just started and don't have many views. Perhaps using tools like top4smm could be a good move forward. Perhaps increasing the amount of action could be a big deal because of the younger viewers.

 

[Luigical]

Appreciate the advice, yeah I think the next videos are gonna be higher paced videos, I will keep this slow tone for video tutorials and such.