Feedback on my server trailer/skit

[nthByte]

Hey there! I'm developing a Factions MMORPG server that will be opened in the near future. To sort of "build up hype" for the server, I have created a trailer/skit for it. Keep in mind that there will be more parts to it:

I look forward to seeing your feedback!

 

[kevintr303]

Hey there! I'm developing a Factions MMORPG server that will be opened in the near future. To sort of "build up hype" for the server, I have created a trailer/skit for it. Keep in mind that there will be more parts to it:

I look forward to seeing your feedback!

I think you should either lower the volume of the music or raise the volume of the voice at the parts that have the two. Like in the end, and around 2:50. The font at the beginning is a little hard to see. Other than that, I think it's pretty decent, however, it might be a little long. Also, this feedback is from the perspective of a prospective player, as I do not have experience in creating server trailers, etc. Good luck with your server!

 

[nthByte]

I think you should either lower the volume of the music or raise the volume of the voice at the parts that have the two. Like in the end, and around 2:50. The font at the beginning is a little hard to see. Other than that, I think it's pretty decent, however, it might be a little long. Also, this feedback is from the perspective of a prospective player, as I do not have experience in creating server trailers, etc. Good luck with your server!

Thanks brother! I appreciate it.

 

[Enuni]

I enjoyed the video! Now, I suggest raising your voices and lower down the music so that we as the audience can understand and hear you perfectly. Nice skit, and good luck with the server!