Feedback on my video edits

[Random_]

This is my first day editing and I made this:

Looking for some feedback

 

[Orochimaru]

It's fortnite, automatic garbage - Minecraft Community

The editing its self is pretty good

 

[Random_]

It's fortnite, automatic garbage - Minecraft Community

The editing its self is pretty good

Thanks for your honesty. It's my first day and fortnite is easiest to edit to try out new features my next challenge is to make a minecraft cinematic like trailer.

Minecraft > Fortnite

 

[Random_]

Gotta give him extra credit, he used Minecraft sounds in the first 30 seconds.

Thank you for pointing that out xD

 

[Ilay A]

Thank you for pointing that out xD

Turn up the game output sound, reduce it only when the screen freezes to play a meme, thanks, it really disturbs me.