Feedback on my Video Game Music I have written. (New track added 19/07/20)

[twinightcreep0]

Heyyy!

So, I'm after some feedback on some WIP music I have written and recorded for a game concept. There are only two tracks (now three) at the minute, but I plan on going at it further over time.
The concept is that you're in a hot air balloon and exploring the terrain and face missions and challenges on the way (such as the weather )

It isn't a real game, but I just find it helps to have a backstory when composing stuff like this.

Feedback good or bad, please send it my way. Always helps to improve!

Thanks!

Track #01:


Track #02:


Track #03:

 

[twinightcreep0]

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[Patrick_DD]

Patrick_DD

Will listen ASAP!! Just out at the moment

 

[Patrick_DD]

Just had a listen, love them both, especially the first one

Was able to listen to all 5 minutes of the playlist without finding it repetitive

Edit: I mean without!!

 

[twinightcreep0]

No clue but this is giving vibes of me playing the nintendo wii back in the day

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Just had a listen, love them both, especially the first one

Was able to listen to all 5 minutes of the playlist with finding it repetitive

Haha, thanks.
You found it repetitive? I mean, it's built on themes as most music for this sorta stuff is. The themes are developed and built upon though. That's what I aimed for.

 

[Patrick_DD]

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Haha, thanks.
You found it repetitive? I mean, it's built on themes as most music for this sorta stuff is. The themes are developed and built upon though. That's what I aimed for.

Nono, sorry my bad, I mistyped. I meant without finding it repetitive haha.

 

[SmackAttack]

Love the second track!
At 1:40 the drums in the first track are a bit too messy and too sudden. But besides that a very nice track!

 

[twinightcreep0]

Nono, sorry my bad, I mistyped. I meant without finding it repetitive haha.

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Love the second track!
At 1:40 the drums in the first track are a bit too messy and too sudden. But besides that a very nice track!

Thanks! Glad you like

The sound at 1:40 is actually thunder. It's what I imagine would happen at that point in the game. Sudden was intentional

 

[Sky.]

I love it, i reminds me of a show I watched when I was child. Brought me back to my childhood oddly enough. Amazing song, gave me a bit of nostalgia.

 

[twinightcreep0]

Based on like, very generic music theory, I think the songs being in the minor scale would be somewhat uncomfortable for someone trying to start a game. The songs are very good though!

Glad you like them.

I'm curious - which track was in a Minor scale?
The first track did have a few minor chords in there (and the insertion of the C Minor at the end for purposeful heightened tension), but only as passing chords.

The first theme in the second track consists of F# and B Minor. Is this what you're referencing? I was going for something very expressive as I imagine this track to be when you're flying over some beautiful terrain. When the second theme comes in (consisting of B Major and C Major) there is a reason for the suspense. Perhaps a storm, or some unexpected weather conditions.
The final section of the track is the theme from the first song to help conclude and re-inforce the "Major" tonality.

Just wondered if you'd care to share a little more.
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I love it, i reminds me of a show I watched when I was child. Brought me back to my childhood oddly enough. Amazing song, gave me a bit of nostalgia.

Haha, am glad to hear it. Glad you like them both

 

[Artisan]

Hey twinightcreep0 !! Very Creative Work. I loved the 1st track more than the 2nd 1. Try to add a bit of electric guiter work for future tracks when the hot air baloon runs into bad weather to add a bit of suspense.

Your tracks reminded me of the Android Mobile Game Swordigo. I really enjoyed a track there. I am sharing below. I am sure you will love it too.

 

[twinightcreep0]

Hey twinightcreep0 !! Very Creative Work. I loved the 1st track more than the 2nd 1. Try to add a bit of electric guiter work for future tracks when the hot air baloon runs into bad weather to add a bit of suspense.

Your tracks reminded me of the Android Mobile Game Swordigo. I really enjoyed a track there. I am sharing below. I am sure you will love it too.

Glad you like the tracks, thanks for your comments!

I was trying to keep the instruments all acoustic but the pointer about electric guitar is cool. Thanks

And thanks for sharing the track from Swordigo. Certainly did enjoy it

 

[Patrick_DD]

I love how dramatic the third one is, yet somehow gives me peaceful Animal Crossing vibes as well! You did a really good job on it

 

[twinightcreep0]

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Haha, glad you like.
Will be happy to hear your thoughts on the second and third.