Feedback on my video?

[Skylord]

(Self advertising)​

Can I get some feedback on my latest Nightcore video? It is my first time doing that style.

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What could be better?

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Did this fix the majority of the issues the previous video had? What could be better?

I decided to go with a solid black and white theme for this video. I personally love it but I am not sure what you all think of it.

 

[Luigical]

Sound quality

 

[Skylord]

Sound quality

I am planning to switch to FL studio relatively soon, I just need to get the money...

 

[Songs]

What could be better?

Avoiding Nightcore would be better.

But I would suggest finding a nice font instead of using a default font.

 

[Skylord]

Avoiding Nightcore would be better.

Ouch

But I would suggest finding a nice font instead of using a default font.

It isn't the default font just nothing overly fancy. I will change it to one that is more unique though.

 

[Nitr0us]

I really like the music itself but as others said the sound quality can be worked on and the background of the video can be worked on a bit too. The moving bars and stuff look really cool its just the text that says your song name looks kinda bad. Good luck with your music!

 

[Skylord]

Did this fix the majority of the issues the previous video had? What could be better?

I decided to go with a solid black and white theme for this video. I personally love it but I am not sure what you all think of it.

 

[Skylord]

The font / the text is kinda weird maybe put some cringe anime picture? idk

Does this fix it?

Did this fix the majority of the issues the previous video had? What could be better?

I decided to go with a solid black and white theme for this video. I personally love it but I am not sure what you all think of it.