Feedback on new style

[Grace.]

Seen some other people make logos of similar style, thought I'd give it a try.

After a while of experimenting, I think it turned out kinda well What do you guys think of it?

 

[Sentiinel]

Instead of black lines around the white highlights just have the white. Other than that, looking good.

 

[Aelin]

Looks awesome! One thing I notice is how the coloring doesn't quite touch the edge of the black lines-- there's a thin white streak between the color and the black lines. Usually caused by the paint bucket being dumb. I'm not sure how it's fixed in Photoshop, but in Krita it's fixed by selecting the area you want to paint bucket and then "Expanding Selection" by 1 or 2 pixels. That way, the couple white pixels won't appear.

Otherwise, looks way better than before! Good job!

 

[Grace.]

Looks awesome! One thing I notice is how the coloring doesn't quite touch the edge of the black lines-- there's a thin white streak between the color and the black lines. Usually caused by the paint bucket being dumb. I'm not sure how it's fixed in Photoshop, but in Krita it's fixed by selecting the area you want to paint bucket and then "Expanding Selection" by 1 or 2 pixels. That way, the couple white pixels won't appear.

Otherwise, looks way better than before! Good job!

Thanks - Just added another one to the main post above. Liking this style more.