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[ImZavl]

Hey, I've been working on my graphic design lately and I've came up with this. Was wondering if I can get some feedback? Took aroun

d 20-40 minutes to make, completely forgot to time it.

 

[Norska]

Might be just me but I think there should be space between @ and the text after it, right now it's mushed together.

 

[solo]

Hey, I've been working on my graphic design lately and I've came up with this. Was wondering if I can get some feedback? Took arounView attachment 435029 d 20-40 minutes to make, completely forgot to time it.

Might be just me but I think there should be space between @ and the text after it, right now it's mushed together.
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Looks really nice

Here's just two things you should do -

Center the ellipses under the "Try:" text with the corresponding text
Put a little bit of space in the socials between the "@" and the socials

 

[ImZavl]

Looks really nice

Here's just two things you should do -

Center the ellipses under the "Try:" text with the corresponding text
Put a little bit of space in the socials between the "@" and the socials

Might be just me but I think there should be space between @ and the text after it, right now it's mushed together.
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Thank you both for your input, will definitely add them in.

 

[PolarGFX]

For me its a bit too jumbled where the @s are if you know what i mean