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I'd like some positive criticism regarding the homepage on my new site - even if it's something small please let me know as I'm planning on making it the very best I possibly can.

Regarding the other pages, feel free to give me ideas on how to present them. The services page has been made - however, the information looks extremely clustered and I'm trying to avoid that.

Link: https://matqx.co.uk
 
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Also please note, I'm fully aware that pressing "back to home page" on the construction site takes you to a non-existent index.html file. It's currently being updated.
 

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I'd like some positive criticism regarding the homepage on my new site - even if it's something small please let me know as I'm planning on making it the very best I possibly can.

Regarding the other pages, feel free to give me ideas on how to present them. The services page has been made - however, the information looks extremely clustered and I'm trying to avoid that.

Link: https://matqx.co.uk
Website looks nice, who made the signature?
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Website seems interesting but there are some things I think need some changing. I'm going to be providing feedback on what I see so if these changes are already planned then awesome! :D

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The navigation: I think the nav links should be with the contact me button and floated to the right. Keeps things together. Also I noticed a bug with your navigation. The above image is a screenshot of the navigation on the home page. The screenshot below is a picture of the navigation on the under construction page.
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The font styles are different (not sure if you spotted that or not but I'm gonna mention it anyway). Same case for the verify page and its content.

Additionally, the "contact me" button does nothing (I'm gonna assumed this is planned).


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The Header button: This button doesn't do anything. You make it seem like an action to perform as when I hover over it, my cursor changes to a point and it fills in as a visual button. You should make this scroll to the next section if it were clicked. There are plenty on libraries that do that and not too hard to do yourself.


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The About Section: I like it. Nice and concise. The only change I'm going to suggest is making the About Me text 700 font-weight, similar to the heading font-weight. I think it sets it off more but up to you. Image below shows what it looks like with 700 font-weight.
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The Carousel: I think the background needs to be changed. It's too light for a dark theme like this. I provided an image below with my suggested change. It also changes height when a new content slide, maybe force the height so it doesn't happen. Remove the third carousel item as well since you don't have content for it just yet.
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Additionally with that section, you should lower the font-size of "Hear about me." simply because the font-size shouldn't be bigger than your main page title.


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The footer: Kind of boring but simple. The font is not the same as the rest of your site so I suggest changing it. 2 fonts is fine but not when it's the only content with that font-family.


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Console errors: You have a lot of errors popping up in console occurring at line 228. Seems "box-test" doesn't exist. This is probably causing the issue of the typewriter content not loading a new line for a long time.


Hope these help :)
 

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As of now it's under construction I see, but for the layout I dig it a lot, I see it being a really nice site in the near future. Best of luck with this!
 

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Lmaoo yes, it's filled with animations - personally, love them sir trovvy.[DOUBLEPOST=1620464393][/DOUBLEPOST]
Looks amazing! It has made me want a website myself

Ahhh, thank you. But yeah, I can recommend a few web developers in that case.[DOUBLEPOST=1620464419][/DOUBLEPOST]
Looks Awesome!

Tanku, much appreciated <3[DOUBLEPOST=1620464544][/DOUBLEPOST]
Website seems interesting but there are some things I think need some changing. I'm going to be providing feedback on what I see so if these changes are already planned then awesome! :D

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The navigation: I think the nav links should be with the contact me button and floated to the right. Keeps things together. Also I noticed a bug with your navigation. The above image is a screenshot of the navigation on the home page. The screenshot below is a picture of the navigation on the under construction page.
View attachment 440882
The font styles are different (not sure if you spotted that or not but I'm gonna mention it anyway). Same case for the verify page and its content.

Additionally, the "contact me" button does nothing (I'm gonna assumed this is planned).


View attachment 440888
The Header button: This button doesn't do anything. You make it seem like an action to perform as when I hover over it, my cursor changes to a point and it fills in as a visual button. You should make this scroll to the next section if it were clicked. There are plenty on libraries that do that and not too hard to do yourself.


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The About Section: I like it. Nice and concise. The only change I'm going to suggest is making the About Me text 700 font-weight, similar to the heading font-weight. I think it sets it off more but up to you. Image below shows what it looks like with 700 font-weight.
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The Carousel: I think the background needs to be changed. It's too light for a dark theme like this. I provided an image below with my suggested change. It also changes height when a new content slide, maybe force the height so it doesn't happen. Remove the third carousel item as well since you don't have content for it just yet.
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Additionally with that section, you should lower the font-size of "Hear about me." simply because the font-size shouldn't be bigger than your main page title.


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The footer: Kind of boring but simple. The font is not the same as the rest of your site so I suggest changing it. 2 fonts is fine but not when it's the only content with that font-family.


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Console errors: You have a lot of errors popping up in console occurring at line 228. Seems "box-test" doesn't exist. This is probably causing the issue of the typewriter content not loading a new line for a long time.


Hope these help :)

Dang, appreciate all the feedback. I'll make sure to include all the changes as I think you've genuinely hit bullseye with most of them. Thank you.[DOUBLEPOST=1620464569][/DOUBLEPOST]
As of now it's under construction I see, but for the layout I dig it a lot, I see it being a really nice site in the near future. Best of luck with this!

Appreciate it <3[DOUBLEPOST=1620464617][/DOUBLEPOST]
I like it but try to use a bit more colour, that would really make it more appealing and eye catching, this is what your site really needs in order to convert viewers to potential clients!

Yeah, I agree, we could've made it a bit more eye-catching. I'm personally just bad with colour schemes in general, tend to go for a darker approach since you typically can't go wrong.
 
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