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Hey MC-Market!

I'd like to get some feedback on the following server advertisement for my new and upcoming server, MineWrath. It is a very different type of advertisement, and isn't really the main trailer for the server. It is sort of just a teaser trailer. Take a look and let me know what you guys think!



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what if gruss didn't make a server
 
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Trailer isn't good. It doesn't necessarily explain what the server is, only that it was made by Gruss. Also the text is to hard to read, maybe add some shadows?
 
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Sunzide said:
Trailer isn't good. It doesn't necessarily explain what the server is, only that it was made by Gruss. Also the text is to hard to read, maybe add some shadows?
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It really isn't a trailer. It is a teaser advertisement. There is going to be a different and more indepth advertisement that will be made (as stated in the thread). Thanks for the feedback!
 
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