Feedback on T-SHIRT Design?

[Executive]

Hey, So I got bored in media arts class and decided to just make a t-shirt design, I made one that looks kind of okay. It's based of drakes brand "oVo" also known as "Octobers Very Own". Just wondering would any of you be interested in purchasing T-shirt designs / do you think it'll be a good idea to add it to my design shop? (Keep in mind this is a really basic design and probably won't look so good. I was thinking it could be redesigned to something where someone's Minecraft server or company would be on the front as a logo than on the back it would display someones name or something etc.

 

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imgur is iffy on mcm, most people can't see embeds.

 

[Executive]

imgur is iffy on mcm, most people can't see embeds.

Thanks for letting me know!, If people still can't see it I've attached a JPEG below.

 

[Mhtro]

You didn't even make the logo + the t-shirt looks bad doesn't have "straight" lines you really must work on it.