Feedback on teaser

[Ilay A]

Alright, if you're here to complain about the story, don't bother leaving a comment.

This is a teaser, pretty shots and good editing, nothing more than that.

How can I improve?

Btw I'll appreciate an appraisal for something around this quality (maybe slightly better) I was in a rush when making this one.

 

[MTG]

pretty okay i guess
but the thing is you cant just go from slow and like calm scene to that scene after [did u miss us] if it went up slowly then that would have been better
but i would say like $25`

 

[Ilay A]

pretty okay i guess
but the thing is you cant just go from slow and like calm scene to that scene after [did u miss us] if it went up slowly then that would have been better
but i would say like $25`

Sounds overpriced , and yeah I agree, I should've hyped it up slightly before going full-on dramatic.

 

[Lachlan]

Tbh I kinda like it. Seems really well made :tup:

 

[Kuchy]

I'd change that "did you miss us" font to match the ending clip font.
Just doesn't look nice with two different fonts.

Overall me like
Looks something around $30-$35

 

[Sponsors]

I like it.
Only thing i would of changed is go from the slow scene then "did you miss us" then the fast pace scene, other then that pretty good.

Looks like about $20-30 piece of work.

 

[Ilay A]

I don't like the ending font.

The customer requested that.

 

[Hannes]

omg someone used the feedback forum for, feedback?? I love you.
No but the font at the start is canverous, some of the transitions are a bit choppy but overall it's quite neat.