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[WardenVFX]

Can someone please watch this video and comment what I should add or fix?

 

[Ziipen]

Hey there

Cool video. You clearly have a big potential.
Try inserting a bit louder and more foolish background music, and fix the reverb on your microphone.

- Maybe also center the text on the screen and use another font + colors

 

[Candid]

You have 30 seconds of content, you need to bring something more to your videos, including more actual content. If you don’t want to be energetic, then fine, but you need to bring something else to your content that no one else brings. I don’t think you should purposely be pessimistic like in this video. You say “I guess this is the part where I show you the outro.” Every sentence should have some sort of purpose to it. This is just so fucking boring and cringe man. If you put in the work and think strategically about what you’re doing you can enjoy success and have a good time. Distinguish yourself, good luck

 

[noxid-evad]

I like the idea of you putting the subtitles in, your video will improve with time try watching other videos similar to yours, and take more feedback from them and give yourself that little extra creative so separate yourself and be unique.

Keep it up!