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rida

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I think the part about it which I like the least is the portfolio section, but I wouldn't know how else to do it since I want to include screenshots of the bots.

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Looks amazing, you used Photoshop for this, correct?
Yes, it was done in Photoshop. Was my first time doing one of these, so I really appreciate the positive feedback!
It looks great.

The colour scheme is extremely nice and I especially like the fact that you use discord to show all the important information. The layout is readable and easily-followed which is also a plus.
Awesome! It follows the colour scheme of my website, and I'm really glad the Discord thing looks great for you despite my skepticism. Thanks a lot for the feedback!
 

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I’m no graphic designer so I’m not sure how much my word is worth, but that’s gorgeous!

Is there a word for designs like this (specifically wavy bright colors against white background) in the graphic design dictionary? I’m Big Thirst for that style but I never know what to call it.

The only thing I’m wondering about is the addition of the little balloon (??) things at the bottom left, they look a tiny bit cluttered to me? Anyways this looks incredibly professional, keep up the good work.
 

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I think there are a few things that could be re-worked on. I made this same mistake when I was a beginner, I always made things either too small or either too big. I think you should try to put a small size gap between primary and tertiary texts, like the header and the description, and keep it to a max of maybe 5-10. Also, you want people to notice the main text, i.e. the header lines in those thread for every paragraph. That doesn't mean you size the heading to 50 and the description to 30. As I said, only a max of 5-10 font gap, maybe even 15 if that doesn't look good, but what most designers use to distinguish these two elements is with the colour. You want a bit more dull colour for the tertiary texts, so a light shade of black.

The services section look a tad big, and I think you should play with the font weights.

If you need more detailed help, I could try re-designing it for you and you could see what changes I made, I guess. But other than that, your work's really nice. Is that your first design?
 

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That is a hella nice thread design.
And the bot looks great too [if it’s yours ;) ]
I can’t wait to see your thread designs in the future
Keep up the good work
 
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