Feedback on trailer?

[moon10k]

Feedback on this? Keep in mind I had a very short timeframe given by the client, and finished this in around 8 hours. [Gathering clips + editing]

 

[Discovered]

Looks good bro

 

[Joey]

It's a good trailer. however the title just makes you look unprofessional, difficult customers are a common occurrence so you must also have the skills to deal with them

 

[moon10k]

It's a good trailer. however the title just makes you look unprofessional, difficult customers are a common occurrence so you must also have the skills to deal with them

It's a unlisted video, it's not being shared with anyone for any other reason than just some feedback. I just wanted to mention it as the trailer may seem a bit lower quality since I had little time to do it.

 

[Flipora]

looks great man. i can see you have transitioned well from server developing

 

[moon10k]

looks great man. i can see you have transitioned well from server developing

 

[Joey]

It's a unlisted video, it's not being shared with anyone for any other reason than just some feedback. I just wanted to mention it as the trailer may seem a bit lower quality since I had little time to do it.

That's fair

 

[hgbf]

The gameplay parts were good (considering the short timeframe), but the first 20 seconds were too much. 10 seconds of logo gives a bad first impression. From that, many will click off without actually looking at the content itself.

 

[Ilay A]

Feedback on this? Keep in mind I had a very short timeframe given by the client, and finished this in around 8 hours. [Gathering clips + editing]

I see someone here got inspired by Yeahs Akari project, first thing first, camera movement is boring, how can you fix it? add shakes of course! Time remaps could have been done better, something feels quite off.[DOUBLEPOST=1545773211][/DOUBLEPOST]

Feedback on this? Keep in mind I had a very short timeframe given by the client, and finished this in around 8 hours. [Gathering clips + editing]

By the way, dang 8 hours? an edit takes me max 3 hours >,<

 

[moon10k]

I see someone here got inspired by Yeahs Akari project, first thing first, camera movement is boring, how can you fix it? add shakes of course! Time remaps could have been done better, something feels quite off.[DOUBLEPOST=1545773211][/DOUBLEPOST]
By the way, dang 8 hours? an edit takes me max 3 hours >,<

I had to get a lot of clips too, but idk. It just took time.