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Think this is my best tbh. Thoughts? 1-10?

 
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I would rate it 7/10. Pretty good. Heres what you should fix:
- Particles at the beginning and the end are like the most basic ones you can create in AE (Makes people who have more knowledge about stuff like this think its a lazy make.) Basically work a bit more on particles. Fire sparkles like would be cool.
- The shake and it's blur could be better

I think this quality is already better than most of trailer sellers on here. GJ
 
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it's aight... def need improvement but one of the main things wrong with this is that the movement is too linear
Could you tell me how I could take better clips then?
 

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He probably means that you should add more rotating of the camera. Look at my trailer for example

I see! I'll do that on my next trailer, thanks!
 

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Really like how it pairs up with the music, but intro is a little too long and there is no buildup to the drop. Really like how the trailer goes along with the music but is a little too overexaggerated sometimes.
 

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Really like how it pairs up with the music, but intro is a little too long and there is no buildup to the drop. Really like how the trailer goes along with the music but is a little too overexaggerated sometimes.
I see, thanks!
 

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Think this is my best tbh. Thoughts? 1-10?


Not trying to insult, the time remaps are bad(some shots just accelerate for no reason, it's always a fade in and fade out, some clips don't transition with a proper flow, and so on...) and barely synced , check tutorials online and invest more time understanding how they work
 
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Not trying to insult, the time remaps are bad(some shots just accelerate for no reason, it's always a fade in and fade out, some clips don't transition with a proper flow, and so on...) and barely synced , check tutorials online and invest more time understanding how they work
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Not trying to insult, the time remaps are bad(some shots just accelerate for no reason, it's always a fade in and fade out, some clips don't transition with a proper flow, and so on...) and barely synced , check tutorials online and invest more time understanding how they work
How is it barely synced?
 

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Some clips are just barely synced, they speed out before hitting the beat, I didn't say the entire thing is not synced at all
lol. Speeding out before the beat and changing the clip on the beat is the most popular syncing method. Even if it wasn't synced like this, there are many more ways to sync.
 
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