Feedback on trailer

[Lighteds]

Hey guys, im a new trailer/video editor and I was wondering what you guys thought of my recent project for my server. Any feedback/advice would be greatly appreciated

 

[Slinky Whisper]

Hello, its looks good, but in some fragments its hard to see the text duo its very light and the sun light is very bright

 

[Quokka]

Completely constructive, and not meaning to be harsh - just my opinions.

• The text is relatively hard to see with the bright backgrounds at some points.
• The font choice could have been a bit better.
• The transitions would be nicer if they had more of an effect between them AND if they matched the music.
• Slide duration is a little bit longer than needed, you could squeeze in more important release info if you shortened them.