[FEEDBACK] Server Trailer

[Jami]

This is like my second server trailer. Would appreciate feedback.



Rate out of 10 pls

 

[Catalinertt]

I don't like that glowing effect. It's destroing my eyes. You can just add that efect when it's a screen with text.

 

[Jami]

I don't like that glowing effect. It's destroing my eyes. You can just add that efect when it's a screen with text.

Which glowing effect?

 

[Ilay A]

This is like my second server trailer. Would appreciate feedback.



Rate out of 10 pls

Said that in PM's , just thought it'll be useful to also point that out here for future editors.
Should've edited the Twitch value graph at 0:14 like this :

 

[Kuchy]

Wtf just happened at 0:57...

 

[Catalinertt]

Which glowing effect?

That glowing effect it's on all the video.

 

[Niko Bellic]

I like it, yes there is room for improvement but doesn't everything?

My feedback:

1. I feel some of the clips do not have enough movement, compared to some of the others, which makes it... feel inconsistent.
2. The clip @ 0.57, I assumed the song or music was not long enough for the trailer and you made a sound effect to fill in the gap. Although I understand why, next time, choose a different and longer music piece so it fills up your entire timeline.

Other than that, keep working hard and you will start to see the difference and look back and think, yeah I should of done that a long time ago.

Goodluck my friend.

 

[Jami]

I like it, yes there is room for improvement but doesn't everything?

My feedback:

1. I feel some of the clips do not have enough movement, compared to some of the others, which makes it... feel inconsistent.
2. The clip @ 0.57, I assumed the song or music was not long enough for the trailer and you made a sound effect to fill in the gap. Although I understand why, next time, choose a different and longer music piece so it fills up your entire timeline.

Other than that, keep working hard and you will start to see the difference and look back and think, yeah I should of done that a long time ago.

Goodluck my friend.

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That glowing effect it's on all the video.

You mean colour correction?[DOUBLEPOST=1547838634][/DOUBLEPOST]

Wtf just happened at 0:57...

This was free, pretty much explains why the ending looks so rushed.

 

[Billison]

8.5

 

[Catalinertt]

You mean colour correction?

No, watch 0:22-0:24. I mean that glowing effect is on all the video and it's destroying my eyes. In 0.1 second it's more black, in another 0.1 it's more white. I don't know how to explain more... That effect you can put just on the text parts.

 

[Jami]

No, watch 0:22-0:24. I mean that glowing effect is on all the video and it's destroying my eyes. In 0.1 second it's more black, in another 0.1 it's more white. I don't know how to explain more... That effect you can put just on the text parts.

Oh, flicker, it's literally on every trailer, it's good not sure why you don't like it.

 

[Catalinertt]

Oh, flicker, it's literally on every trailer, it's good not sure why you don't like it.

Yeah, but your flicker it's overmuch.