[FEEDBACK] Trailer #3

[moon10k]

Feedback on this trailer? What could I change/improve?

 

[Tecca]

I personally like the style of it I haven’t seen anything like it.

 

[Vierdant]

It's actually a decent trailer, I like how you did the start of it.
But... I'm not a fan of the music

 

[moon10k]

It's actually a decent trailer, I like how you did the start of it.
But... I'm not a fan of the music

The music the 1st part was chosen by the client, It's really weird yeah xd

 

[Ilay A]

Feedback on this trailer? What could I change/improve?

In my opinion, the entire first part could just be a teaser itself just like woodzy did, it doesn't tell any story and it doesn't tease the viewer towards the active footage, I'd skip around or just click off at some point, it is way too long.
Good idea but... it might be a time consumer.
On 1:25 , you skipped so many good beats and ended up having pretty long shots, it gets boring at some point, you should switch shots more often and try to maximize the use of the beats (but if you're not experienced with it, switch a shot every 2-4 seconds.
Dragging us to watching the same shot for 6-10 seconds and doing that 5 times throughout the trailer is pretty devastating

 

[moon10k]

In my opinion, the entire first part could just be a teaser itself just like woodzy did, it doesn't tell any story and it doesn't tease the viewer towards the active footage, I'd skip around or just click off at some point, it is way too long.
Good idea but... it might be a time consumer.
On 1:25 , you skipped so many good beats and ended up having pretty long shots, it gets boring at some point, you should switch shots more often and try to maximize the use of the beats (but if you're not experienced with it, switch a shot every 2-4 seconds.
Dragging us to watching the same shot for 6-10 seconds and doing that 5 times throughout the trailer is pretty devastating

Gotcha, for the 1st part, that's what the client wanted. But I do agree with you on the beats, I did skip quite a bit. I'll get more clips next time. There just wasn't much to showcase.