[FEEDBACK] Trailer stuff again lol.
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I think you should slow down the text motion (a bit). Or only slow down the drop of the last letter more than it already is (I know it slows down there already but more). This might give a bit more emphasises on the text.
The complete silence at the end feels a bit odd imo.
I do not think the yellow lens flare at the end fits the logo.
I'm a bit lost on the effect on the logo at the beginning.
The thundering background is interesting.
I notice that the thunder scene is always the same. Minor detail.
Same ending
Generic beginning. (I like the little pull on the bass drum though.)
I like the switch at 0:34
This trailer does not do much wrong.
But honestly, it does not do much right (uniqueness) either (it's excellent for the price, so don't worry about that).
I'd love to see you make this more of a true trailer. Play with sounds and try to convey a story or hype or try and sell the server to the player. Do not just slam a random song under it and hope it generates hype. Even though I am a fan of The Score, the music is again generic and overused on trailers.
I just miss uniqueness. What would make me remember this trailer or actually go onto that server? IMO it does not appeal to me at all. It's generic. I would just move on with my day.
Do not get me wrong, the shots improve(d), the transitions are better every time and you get somewhat more creative but I still miss a touch of the one and only true moon10k. A little teaspoon of originality that you can only get from you.
The complete silence at the end feels a bit odd imo.
I do not think the yellow lens flare at the end fits the logo.
I'm a bit lost on the effect on the logo at the beginning.
The thundering background is interesting.
I notice that the thunder scene is always the same. Minor detail.
Same ending
Generic beginning. (I like the little pull on the bass drum though.)
I like the switch at 0:34
This trailer does not do much wrong.
But honestly, it does not do much right (uniqueness) either (it's excellent for the price, so don't worry about that).
I'd love to see you make this more of a true trailer. Play with sounds and try to convey a story or hype or try and sell the server to the player. Do not just slam a random song under it and hope it generates hype. Even though I am a fan of The Score, the music is again generic and overused on trailers.
I just miss uniqueness. What would make me remember this trailer or actually go onto that server? IMO it does not appeal to me at all. It's generic. I would just move on with my day.
Do not get me wrong, the shots improve(d), the transitions are better every time and you get somewhat more creative but I still miss a touch of the one and only true moon10k. A little teaspoon of originality that you can only get from you.
Love the feedback as always. Take into account the time I get for these, If clients are willing to give a decent timeframe, I'd happily drop in a few unique things in there, but sometimes I get a lot of orders and have to get them done in very little time, so that's why I can't always include a lot. But once again, appreciate the feedback as usual!I think you should slow down the text motion (a bit). Or only slow down the drop of the last letter more than it already is (I know it slows down there already but more). This might give a bit more emphasises on the text.
The complete silence at the end feels a bit odd imo.
I do not think the yellow lens flare at the end fits the logo.
I'm a bit lost on the effect on the logo at the beginning.
The thundering background is interesting.
I notice that the thunder scene is always the same. Minor detail.
Same ending
Generic beginning. (I like the little pull on the bass drum though.)
I like the switch at 0:34
This trailer does not do much wrong.
But honestly, it does not do much right (uniqueness) either (it's excellent for the price, so don't worry about that).
I'd love to see you make this more of a true trailer. Play with sounds and try to convey a story or hype or try and sell the server to the player. Do not just slam a random song under it and hope it generates hype. Even though I am a fan of The Score, the music is again generic and overused on trailers.
I just miss uniqueness. What would make me remember this trailer or actually go onto that server? IMO it does not appeal to me at all. It's generic. I would just move on with my day.
Do not get me wrong, the shots improve(d), the transitions are better every time and you get somewhat more creative but I still miss a touch of the one and only true moon10k. A little teaspoon of originality that you can only get from you.
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