[FEEDBACK] Trailer

[Jami]

Give feedback and appraisal please.

Thanks.

 

[Jami]

Whats the point on being toxic. This guy simply asked for feedback on his work. He isn't asking for anything from us. And frankly he is doing much better then you.

Looks great Jami , the only thing I would change is the colour of the red text to a darker colour. At some points its hard to see.

Thanks, will keep that in mind.[DOUBLEPOST=1551129289][/DOUBLEPOST]

Jami , Looks amazing. I would say that the text is the only issue, maybe that could be implemented in a better way. In terms of an appraisal, I would say you could sell these for $20-$30 probably

Thank you!

 

[KelvinZomer]

Really amazing dude, love the flow

 

[BrettPlays]

looks noice.

 

[Jami]

Really amazing dude, love the flow

Thanks bro![DOUBLEPOST=1552243260][/DOUBLEPOST]

looks noice.

Thanks!

 

[BrettPlays]

Thanks bro![DOUBLEPOST=1552243260][/DOUBLEPOST]
Thanks!

song name?

 

[Jami]

song name?

 

[Ilay A]

Give feedback and appraisal please.

Thanks.

Dang that was bumped , and I missed that lmao, well Jami, I see you're making a very basic mistake, you don't delete the first frame of the render, the first frame is a bright disgusting frame, make sure to delete that before every remap, also could have used some shakes and maximized the beats of the song angles are better but decrease the FOV a little, I use 35, naisu improvement overall[DOUBLEPOST=1552243612][/DOUBLEPOST]

song name?

Jami is silly, that's the original song :

 

[Jami]

Dang that was bumped , and I missed that lmao, well Jami, I see you're making a very basic mistake, you don't delete the first frame of the render, the first frame is a bright disgusting frame, make sure to delete that before every remap, also could have used some shakes and maximized the beats of the song angles are better but decrease the FOV a little, I use 35, naisu improvement overall[DOUBLEPOST=1552243612][/DOUBLEPOST]
Jami is silly, that's the original song :

This is really old xD but thanks.

 

[Ilay A]

This is really old xD but thanks.

Yes, owo , bumped, but u don't show meh stuff anymore so I can't really tell

 

[Jami]

Yes, owo , bumped, but u don't show meh stuff anymore so I can't really tell

I don't edit that much, been busy with programming and other projects

 

[DarkKnights22]

Looks fantastic, the quality is amazing! The only thing I would say is change the music up a bit.

 

[Jami]

Looks fantastic, the quality is amazing! The only thing I would say is change the music up a bit.

Thanks