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[Krislyn]

I'm trying out low poly art, let me know what you think + apprasials :3
Since this is my first it's pretty basic and it doesn't have many elements.

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[Heated]

Very nice. Maybe $10$-$20

 

[Mint]

I suggest that you ckec out ShinySwordStorm , he's awesome with low poly art

 

[oooo]

Looks nice!

 

[vanzoest96]

I like it!

 

[vhckxgpzVK]

I'd say from $15-$30. The water is okay. There are shadows in the sky.. (from the clouds). Also, the tree trunk seems TOO low poly from the rest. You should maybe add more to the ground, maybe something like grass patches or bushes. You should consider a better shader, are those just the default lights/shaders? (if you are using C4D).

 

[ShinySwordStorm]

I'd agree with $15-$20. Keep on messing with different ways of randomizing your shapes to make them more organic and overall look better. And while it is low poly, certain areas can look good with a little more geometry to work with, like the tree or the water. Also try to mess with textures. Experiment a little with the water and maybe add a diffusion layer to some of your plain materials. Here are some decent examples of stuff I've made. But the point is, there are lots of ways to go about low poly so try all sorts of things and see what works. Also, try messing with global illumination and light mapping. It can make a scene look really good if used properly.

 

[Ataku]

i'd say $15.