First Build - Tell me what you think!

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Hello everyone!

I am trying to boost my building skills. So i built this lobby. I don't know if i want to sell it or keep it. Please tell me what you think. I know i am not the best, but i am learning!

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If you added more shades of blocks everywhere then it would be worth more. Good job so far. :D
 

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Shade? Tell me more =)
He's referring to the lack of colors. The build consists of just a purple clay. Try adding more blocks/clays into the build to give it character.

Still very nice build!
 

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From what I've seen it looks nice to sort of give a "withered" look to builds. I have seen people do things like make tiny holes in the wall or placing vines or making like leaf tuffs. I don't know though becuase I'm not a professional builder :p
 

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He's referring to the lack of colors. The build consists of just a purple clay. Try adding more blocks/clays into the build to give it character.

Still very nice build!
Ahh! Ok! Thank you!

From what I've seen it looks nice to sort of give a "withered" look to builds. I have seen people do things like make tiny holes in the wall or placing vines or making like leaf tuffs. I don't know though becuase I'm not a professional builder :p
Thank you <3 Withered.... Didn't know that xD
 

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The Pallete you've gone with is quite boring, and doesn't offer much variation or colour depth. If you want to use these kind of colours, I suggest using a pallete similar to this:
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this way it doesn't stick to two main colours, meaning it adds more variation. Another problem is your depth in your structure. It only variates at most from 1 to 2 layers, and it doesn't really 'pop out much. I made this quick to show that by using a bit more depth can make the build more interesting;
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It's a really good start, and keep at it :)
 

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Wow! The last one is something i am kinda aiming for. Thank you!
 

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It's extremely good for your first build, I would appraise it at $5-8 if you sell it in the builds section. If it had been custom, I would've paid $10-15 for it.
 

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It's extremely good for your first build, I would appraise it at $5-8 if you sell it in the builds section. If it had been custom, I would've paid $10-15 for it.
Sorry, custom? And thank you <3
 

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Thank you everyone. <3 All of your support is amazing!
 
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