First ever trailer! Opinions?

[Truc]

Hello everyone! This is the first trailer I ever made and it's for my upcoming survival server.
Please tell me what you think and all that good stuff below!

Cheers!

 

[Truc]

Looks decent for a first trailer . As others have suggested I suggest using replay mod too Have a nice day m8

Thanks

 

[Matty]

Hello everyone! This is the first trailer I ever made and it's for my upcoming survival server.
Please tell me what you think and all that good stuff below!

Cheers!

To be honest it was an impressive trailer - especially for first attempts. I noticed the first time your project showed up the text and the logo was up for way too short. The text used looks rather unprofessional and timed almost the same every single time (it'd be better to sync it in with music) at the end I'd also recommend adding a minimal fade - maybe going into the distance eg. flying into the sun with a subtle fade effect. Anyways, in general, I enjoyed it

 

[Truc]

To be honest it was an impressive trailer - especially for first attempts. I noticed the first time your project showed up the text and the logo was up for way too short. The text used looks rather unprofessional and timed almost the same every single time (it'd be better to sync it in with music) at the end I'd also recommend adding a minimal fade - maybe going into the distance eg. flying into the sun with a subtle fade effect. Anyways, in general, I enjoyed it

Thank you very much! Will take the tips into count!

 

[Survvz]

Hello everyone! This is the first trailer I ever made and it's for my upcoming survival server.
Please tell me what you think and all that good stuff below!

Cheers!

looks great, good job

 

[Truc]

looks great, good job

Thanks a ton !

 

[Veganlaser]

very naise

 

[Truc]

very naise

Thanks

 

[Oh Its Shallow]

Hello everyone! This is the first trailer I ever made and it's for my upcoming survival server.
Please tell me what you think and all that good stuff below!

Cheers!

Hey there! This trailer looks amazing. Can tell the hard work pays off!

 

[seth]

It's good for your first I suggest keeping a trailer under 1min long and don't add lots of text just my opinion still really cool! I don't know what you use to make these with but if you use after effects I suggest learning how to use twixtor its really cool imo

 

[Truc]

It's good for your first I suggest keeping a trailer under 1min long and don't add lots of text just my opinion still really cool! I don't know what you use to make these with but if you use after effects I suggest learning how to use twixtor its really cool imo

Thanks! I use Sony Vegas 17 :3