First Graphics / Don't be to harsh pwease

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[n0tzach]

Hate.

I mean try to split up the areas better

 

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Hate.

I mean try to split up the areas better

Ok, Thanks

 

[AdamW]

It's not that bad

 

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It's not that bad

Thanks!

 

[twinightcreep0]

I've got feedback on your title.

It should be "too harsh"

 

[Chad Cochran]

Not bad; I would recommend making the thread image clickable to a hyperlink for the discord server though! (Also, it seems the link has expired?)

 

[Dinoo_]

These are not bad.

 

[Ally]

Not bad, but your design has no flow; your title doesn't flow into the block of black and the images feel clunky, as if they're just plonked there and done with. You probably need to increase your fluidity a bit. One good way to do this is depth.

 

[fin]

I've got feedback on your title.

It should be "too harsh"

lol, Anything helps!

Not bad; I would recommend making the thread image clickable to a hyperlink for the discord server though! (Also, it seems the link has expired?)

yeah, i'm working on that

These are not bad.

Thanks

Not bad, but your design has no flow; your title doesn't flow into the block of black and the images feel clunky, as if they're just plonked there and done with. You probably need to increase your fluidity a bit. One good way to do this is depth.

Thanks, will do!

 

[ThomasDeveloper]

Not bad at all. You just need to practice and you'll get much better

 

[Arash]

It's not bad not very good either. IMO you should make it so it has a smooth separation between the games.
(Maybe choose another font?)
And if you can go for another catchphrase or smth because we know that's Razer's thing.

Still, not bad overall