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[Dezpwcible]

What do you think?

 

[TheBardd]

No comment

 

[Dezpwcible]

No comment

Ik its bad

 

[Flipora]

I like the templated stuff but the background isn't good it makes the text look bad because they're the same color the text needs to stand out I would have a one color background but others work but can't be same color as text.

 

[Dezpwcible]

I like the templated stuff but the background isn't good it makes the text look bad because they're the same color the text needs to stand out I would have a one color background but others work but can't be same color as text.

Thanks for the tip senpai really appreciate it[DOUBLEPOST=1517946617][/DOUBLEPOST]

make it not as bold in my idea

Roger that

 

[Donut]

It looks good but I feel its messy with the bold text etc

 

[Khyree]

I'll be honest, it doens't look good.

• 1. No HD background used or anything HQ related.
• 2. The text imo is too big, it just pops in your face.
• 3. A different font would be better.
• 4. What are these? http://prntscr.com/ib3if4
• 5. The resolution is a bit weird, what I like to use is something like 1500x500, or 600x140.
• 6. I'm pretty sure you wrote text, and then just made it bigger with selection tool, instead of making the font size bigger.
• 7. The strokes on the logos are totally not needed.
• 8. And for last, what program did you use?

Look, sorry for this critique, but I just want to help you if you're really looking to become a graphic designer. I know, making your first couple of designs will be hard, but you'll need to learn out of it. So here, I just gave you a few tips Hope you'll accept this as a compliment. Goodluck bud.

-Khyree

 

[Dezpwcible]

I'll be honest, it doens't look good.

• 1. No HD background used or anything HQ related.
• 2. The text imo is too big, it just pops in your face.
• 3. A different font would be better.
• 4. What are these? http://prntscr.com/ib3if4
• 5. The resolution is a bit weird, what I like to use is something like 1500x500, or 600x140.
• 6. I'm pretty sure you wrote text, and then just made it bigger with selection tool, instead of making the font size bigger.
• 7. The strokes on the logos are totally not needed.
• 8. And for last, what program did you use?

Look, sorry for this critique, but I just want to help you if you're really looking to become a graphic designer. I know, making your first couple of designs will be hard, but you'll need to learn out of it. So here, I just gave you a few tips Hope you'll accept this as a compliment. Goodluck bud.

-Khyree

Where have people like you gone??!! Thanks sooooo much, i was only playing around but i wont dissapoint next time and you can bet on that

 

[Ayiu]

Where have people like you gone??!! Thanks sooooo much, i was only playing around but i wont dissapoint next time and you can bet on that

I agree with Khyree, but I know for a fact you can make amazing graphics if you want to. ;3

 

[Dezpwcible]

I agree with Khyree, but I know for a fact you can make amazing graphics if you want to. ;3

the question is : do i WANT to make amazing graphics?