First Trailer Attempt

[ITechnologyman]

So I tried to make a basic trailer and idk how I feel about it lol (Yes I used Hypixel because its easy af). There are some things I would change the next time around but any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

 

[Aabes]

Text is bad, it's not bad for a first attempt. Only thing I would change is the text font

 

[ITechnologyman]

Text is bad, it's not bad for a first attempt. Only thing I would change is the text font

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Some bits feel a little too fast for the song. But you did really good on the cinematics and it was great for a first try

Thank you for the positive feedback

 

[slapes]

Needs a color correction and text animations, though a great first try!

Also increase your render distance a bit, the shadows were loading in on one of the cinematics

 

[Kuchy]

Thank god you're not one of those people who use Alan Walker - Fade as their background music for their first attempt. Good song but I'm just tired of hearing that damn song in a trailer video.

I like it but I do agree with Aabes
The text could use some work to be honest. With the font and white color, I spend more time trying to read the text than seeing what the server offers (I know what hypixel offers but just talking in general).

The clips cut off a little too quick. After I see what the text says, *bam* next set of text. You can probably extend the clips out another 5 seconds or so each.

 

[AttackSpeed]

get a better shader pack, i swear that makes a huge difference

 

[ITechnologyman]

Needs a color correction and text animations, though a great first try!

Also increase your render distance a bit, the shadows were loading in on one of the cinematics

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Thank god you're not one of those people who use Alan Walker - Fade as their background music for their first attempt. Good song but I'm just tired of hearing that damn song in a trailer video.

I like it but I do agree with Aabes
The text could use some work to be honest. With the font and white color, I spend more time trying to read the text than seeing what the server offers (I know what hypixel offers but just talking in general).

The clips cut off a little too quick. After I see what the text says, *bam* next set of text. You can probably extend the clips out another 5 seconds or so each.

I wasn’t sure what to do with the text so I left it basic. I guess I could have doubled the time for text but imo would have felt weird.[DOUBLEPOST=1553457775][/DOUBLEPOST]

get a better shader pack, i swear that makes a huge difference

Exact shaderpacks Ells uses but with no colour correction.

 

[Ilay A]

Thanks for the advice[DOUBLEPOST=1553457742][/DOUBLEPOST]
I wasn’t sure what to do with the text so I left it basic. I guess I could have doubled the time for text but imo would have felt weird.[DOUBLEPOST=1553457775][/DOUBLEPOST]
Exact shaderpacks Ells uses but with no colour correction.

Idk about you, but that's 100% not BSL shaderpack lol

 

[ITechnologyman]

Idk about you, but that's 100% not BSL shaderpack lol

Ells uses a slightly modified Chocapic13’s shaders. I just need to change some atmospheric properties for for better fog.

 

[Ilay A]

Ells uses a slightly modified Chocapic13’s shaders. I just need to change some atmospheric properties for for better fog.

Use BSL instead, trust me, far better than Chocapic for 90% of the situations

 

[Eric]

Really nice, how did you make the camera wiggle/jiggle effect? Always wanted to know how to do that ;p

 

[hohos]

10/10 trailer..

but I still think mine is better
*jk don't hurt me.*
https://www.mc-market.org/threads/464698/

I like it, use some suggestions and I can see you being someone I come to in the future.

 

[DeletedUser372845]

10/10 Love this trailer!

 

[Izuku]

10/10

 

[Lakia]

8/10 trailer. You understand the current trailer market. Now just work on optimizing the timings of everything, the song choice, and the shaders/ colors

 

[Ilay A]

So I tried to make a basic trailer and idk how I feel about it lol (Yes I used Hypixel because its easy af). There are some things I would change the next time around but any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Rework cinematics, reduce FOV please