Hand Drawn Opinions
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Thanks for the feed back
Heres a list of things im noticing:
- Sword isnt symmetrical (the bottom half is bigger than the top one, look at the hilt of the sword and compare it to that)
- unless some alien came to take a bite out of that sword, or its just made out of some candy, the spots where there are pieces missing should probably be with much sharper angles, not smooth and round ones.
- I dont have much to say about the text i actually kind of like it, one problem is though, the holes in the Ps in "PVP" should probs be clear (aka show the color of the sword, and not show white)
Theres more stuff you could work on but those are the few that come to mind first, hope it helps
- Sword isnt symmetrical (the bottom half is bigger than the top one, look at the hilt of the sword and compare it to that)
- unless some alien came to take a bite out of that sword, or its just made out of some candy, the spots where there are pieces missing should probably be with much sharper angles, not smooth and round ones.
- I dont have much to say about the text i actually kind of like it, one problem is though, the holes in the Ps in "PVP" should probs be clear (aka show the color of the sword, and not show white)
Theres more stuff you could work on but those are the few that come to mind first, hope it helps
ThanksHeres a list of things im noticing:
- Sword isnt symmetrical (the bottom half is bigger than the top one, look at the hilt of the sword and compare it to that)
- unless some alien came to take a bite out of that sword, or its just made out of some candy, the spots where there are pieces missing should probably be with much sharper angles, not smooth and round ones.
- I dont have much to say about the text i actually kind of like it, one problem is though, the holes in the Ps in "PVP" should probs be clear (aka show the color of the sword, and not show white)
Theres more stuff you could work on but those are the few that come to mind first, hope it helps
I think sometimes I don't really think when I sketch lmao[DOUBLEPOST=1508964221][/DOUBLEPOST]I do know that I have crazy lots of improving so If I do these every once in a while, I can get feed back from real people.
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