Help with thread layout

[Black_Bird956]

Hey guys! I'm currently working on a thread setup because I don't have any money to pay someone to do it for me. This is what I have so far but i'm not 100% happy with it yet I personally don't like how I put the logo in however I'm not a designer or anything so I'm not that good but here it is do you guys have any feedback?

 

[Black_Bird956]

Don't use Imgur.

What do I need to use to upload the picture here than? - Edit Using gyazo now, does it work?

 

[Black_Bird956]

Any but Imgur.

PostImage.org, etc[DOUBLEPOST=1468614288][/DOUBLEPOST]Suggest adding 'Contact Me' and maybe 'About Me' sections. Also I think it would look more professional if you made 'OUR SETUPS' into 'OUR SERVICES'.

Okay thanks for your feedback!

 

[Lemon Design]

First of all your Logo is not the biggest Problem.

The Bulletpoints should be in a line not like that in your design because it looks really messy.
Next thing give your words/font a little bit more room and don't press it against the border. Your generell balance of type color and white space is not that good.

An other point is the font itself. For the headlines and the prices you can use that font but not for the normal text. It is to chaotic i think. Try to use something like Helvetica, Frutiger and so on Museo Sans.... etc. So fonts without serifs. Clean and simple. -> importand because your letters arent that big = better readability in running text.

There is a lot more but that should be good for the beginning ^^

oh and sorry for my english i hope you can understand what i want to tell you XD

 

[Black_Bird956]

First of all your Logo is not the biggest Problem.

The Bulletpoints should be in a line not like that in your design because it looks really messy.
Next thing give your words/font a little bit more room and don't press it against the border. Your generell balance of type color and white space is not that good.

An other point is the font itself. For the headlines and the prices you can use that font but not for the normal text. It is to chaotic i think. Try to use something like Helvetica, Frutiger and so on Museo Sans.... etc. So fonts without serifs. Clean and simple. -> importand because your letters arent that big = better readability in running text.

There is a lot more but that should be good for the beginning ^^

oh and sorry for my english i hope you can understand what i want to tell you XD

Thanks a lot for the feedback and your english is great don't worry i'm not english either. Anyways I think i'll leave it to the designers i'm just not good enough to do it myself

 

[WhereDidMyNameGo]

If you use illustrator/photoshop. I suggest going in the top left. Select FILE than export. Click export AS than save as PNG. Than go make a forum thread on here and upload the file. Than click "Full image". When the image uploads to MCM.