Honest Opinions?

[JhGaming]

I recently made my first and only PvP montage.
I would like your honest opinions on it.
Please don't reply with the following:
The quality is bad. (I already know this, I was in livestream settings)
I only fought one person (I already know this, I was testing the editing.)
It's laggy. (Watch on YouTube.com)

 

[Pinball]

bit over-edited imo

 

[wolfgirlfan]

The continuous slow to fast motion editing really makes the video unappealing [which to alot of users makes it appear "laggy"], along with the color filter that has been put on it. I'd much rather see the video without the slow motion edits and color effects, and of course how the rest of the battle went. Aka, if you won or lost.

However, still a good video nonetheless.

 

[Sus]

I think bases on the visual graphics, it would look better normally if it wasnt slower. I personally like it though. Graphics and shit like this I could never do xD. Looks good