How can I improve my track?

[Mendrix]

This is my second attempt to create an EDM track. It has a tropical vibe to it, slowed down to 110 BPM. It's a minute long with a little intro.
Any feedback is appreciated. I am posting this track to learn and build my skills. Please don't hold back! Thanks.

 

[Trochek]

Pretty good for your second time! Practice will show