how can I improve?

[d e c l a n]

I want to get back into designing things and I was just wondering how exactly I can prove. Any feedback would be appreciated
Any tips/tricks would also be appreciated ​

 

[SteamSeller523]

Use red somewhere in the middle like a line dividing the sections.

 

[internetprovider]

looks quite nice ngl

 

[d e c l a n]

looks quite nice ngl

thank you! [DOUBLEPOST=1544381990][/DOUBLEPOST]

Use red somewhere in the middle like a line dividing the sections.

Just like a straight line or like a wavey sort of thing?
thanks for commenting by the way

 

[Guts]

I think you should change color, red doesn't suit loan service.
Read about color meaning by clients.

 

[SteamSeller523]

thank you! [DOUBLEPOST=1544381990][/DOUBLEPOST]
Just like a straight line or like a wavey sort of thing?
thanks for commenting by the way

I feel just a straight line would do the job, wavy doesn't match the rest of it

 

[Mwex]

Lol I thought this was for real xD

The thread looks nice, but I’m more of the clean side.

 

[d e c l a n]

Lol I thought this was for real xD

The thread looks nice, but I’m more of the clean side.

Not sure what you meant by the first part

How could I improve it? [DOUBLEPOST=1544383795][/DOUBLEPOST]

I feel just a straight line would do the job, wavy doesn't match the rest of it

Okay, I'll play around with it [DOUBLEPOST=1544383824][/DOUBLEPOST]

I think you should change color, red doesn't suit loan service.
Read about color meaning by clients.

Never really thought about that, thanks!

 

[Guts]

Also, you should make the loan format more visible.

 

[Mwex]

I like a full white more rather than red lines.

And maybe you can outline the text so that every line looks the same.

 

[d e c l a n]

Also, you should make the loan format more visible.

Personally thought the text was visible, but thanks.

Looks nice but I hate the font and how like 4 sentences it goes to a new line and how big it is, I'd make the text a bit smaller and then put something on the side, like an about you, link or contact links?

Any font suggestions?
I'll make it smaller and try and add an additional section.

I like a full white more rather than red lines.

And maybe you can outline the text so that every line looks the same.

I'm unsure what exactly you mean. Add an outline to the text or like a potential box? thanks again [DOUBLEPOST=1544387180][/DOUBLEPOST]How much would you all value something like this at?

 

[d e c l a n]

How can you improve this? You can't it looks super neat.

Thanks, I appreciate it [DOUBLEPOST=1544465581][/DOUBLEPOST]Again, just wondering what everyone would value this at? In its current state that is.