How is my cinematic?

[Ataku]

Hey!
My name is Ataku!

I was just wondering if the community here would rate this cinematic!

 

[Ryaoffic]

And what's the point of that video? Lol

 

[Ataku]

And what's the point of that video? Lol

On my channel I was doing cinematics of blowing up tnt lol every time I did more and more... the text is showing how much for that video behind it.[DOUBLEPOST=1466372412][/DOUBLEPOST]

And what's the point of that video? Lol

oh yes and It was all tnt I had gotten legit in game

 

[Eqs]

Its not that good being honest.

 

[Ataku]

Its not that good being honest.

Thanks for your opinion! Anyway I could improve?

 

[Luke]

4/10. the text looks ugly, find a better font and better color and better placement. get rid of the black bars. the intro is unappealing and laggy, and the music is kind of annoying. the chat is also inappropriate and not good for young viewers, and should be hidden from your video.

 

[Ataku]

4/10. the text looks ugly, find a better font and better color and better placement. get rid of the black bars. the intro is unappealing and laggy, and the music is kind of annoying. the chat is also inappropriate and not good for young viewers, and should be hidden from your video.

Wow! great tips there! I did make this 6 months ago, but it was something that I had for cinematic wise. Thank you.