I need feedback

[Vierdant]

So I'm working on this project. Building its foundation.
For now I started designing the menus for it and stuff like that, so I came up with this design.

As you can see, you can navigate and stuff (Yes it's minecraft). So this "Hero" menu, I need feedback on the icons, their positions and whatever.

What would you think if you see something like this in a minecraft server you just joined?
If you don't like it, please state why so I can try and improve.

 

[Sloth]

Pretty much what TK stated. You're on the right track but you should definitely tune out the text and the icons to look cleaner.

 

[ChristianDiscord]

The text looks very out of place, the shopping cart icon I feel would look best if fully aligned.

 

[Vierdant]

The text looks super unnatural and the icons are also fairly unclean. I wouldn't like it

Pretty much what TK stated. You're on the right track but you should definitely tune out the text and the icons to look cleaner.

The text looks very out of place, the shopping cart icon I feel would look best if fully aligned.

Aight, thank you guys! I will try and improve the text and the icons a bit. by unclean, do you mean pixely?

 

[Vierdant]

Personally, I like the classic Minecraft menu from this, looks too futuristic in my opinion.

It's a futuristic server. So that's good.

TK Ah, you are right. I will work on that.

 

[Vierdant]

The text looks very out of place, the shopping cart icon I feel would look best if fully aligned.

The text looks super unnatural and the icons are also fairly unclean. I wouldn't like it

I really tried cleaning the text as much as possible. About the icons, I changed one of them, deleted some others but I couldn't get the rest more cleaner than that. I guess the GD saying is true, you can't learn a game until you play it.
I also changed the order of things. I don't man, but I'm happy with this one more than the one before.

 

[Vierdant]

I have no idea why I'm investing in this, but here you go:

1. Change the font completely if possible; That seems to be the main issue
2. Flip the shopping cart icon around and make sure the add an end line to the cart's basket. A better idea imo is just to use a shopping basket, as it's very familiar and and can't be confused with a lot of things.
3. The chest is looking better, but make sure that you add a tiny bit of depth to it so that it is identifiable as an mc chest.
4. Make the i in the info icon more clear and visible. Feels a bit squinty.
5. Using pixels to make designs more futuristic is probably not the best idea for the top right as you don't have a lot of space. Just make it a nice and clean box.

Please don't take this personally, only meant to help. You also don't have to listen to some of the tips I gave if you don't want to, but I'm speaking from a stranger's perspective.

I wouldn't really have this thread up if I don't want to listen to the tips that were given to me.
This is just a side project I'm doing to test my limitations in the minecraft server development carrier. I guess I'm not the best artist lol. I will try my best to improve this. Thanks.



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