Kingdoms of Argus Server Trailer

[MarcusG]

Looking for feedback for this server trailer. The server releases for beta tomorrow afternoon. Let me know what you think

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[Flawws]

It looks great but considering I was at 1080p, it sure as hell didn't look like it.
Would recommend fixing the quality, too much text and not enough fast pace motion. We want to look at the server.

- Flawws.

 

[MarcusG]

It looks great but considering I was at 1080p, it sure as hell didn't look like it.
Would recommend fixing the quality, too much text and not enough fast pace motion. We want to look at the server.

- Flawws.

I knew you were going to say something like this the moment I saw your profile name lol. Thanks for your feedback though [DOUBLEPOST=1544920496][/DOUBLEPOST]

Very nice.

If you don’t mind me asking, how much was it?
I’m looking into one similar for a different game mode.

Only $40 from KelvinZomer

 

[Flawws]

I knew you were going to say something like this the moment I saw your profile name lol.

How come?

 

[MarcusG]

How come?

Your name is Flawws.. assumed you were going to point out the flaws in the video

 

[hgbf]

It looks great but considering I was at 1080p, it sure as hell didn't look like it.

Can confirm at 1440p.

Also, 6 seconds of black in the beginning makes the first impression of the trailer a bit boring. There are also 5 seconds of this at the end, leaving 50-ish seconds left for the actual trailer. Out of those 50, only 15-20 were in-game footage. I know this is a personal preference, but I would prefer a bit more. The text says that it is a kingdom RPG. In the entire trailer, there's no gameplay showcasing the RPG features.

Nice trailer otherwise! The movement is smooth and looks great.

EDIT: After another look, without full-screen, I saw that 0:19 looks weird even at a small scale. For the rest of the trailer, it's mainly the text and logo that look pixelated.

 

[MarcusG]

Can confirm at 1440p.

Also, 6 seconds of black in the beginning makes the first impression of the trailer a bit boring. There are also 5 seconds of this at the end, leaving 50-ish seconds left for the actual trailer. Out of those 50, only 15-20 were in-game footage. I know this is a personal preference, but I would prefer a bit more. The text says that it is a kingdom RPG. In the entire trailer, there's no gameplay showcasing the RPG features.

Nice trailer otherwise! The movement is smooth and looks great.

EDIT: After another look, without full-screen, I saw that 0:19 looks weird even at a small scale. For the rest of the trailer, it's mainly the text and logo that look pixelated.

Well. The server is in beta and the said features aren't implemented yet. I will look into a better trailer upon full release of the server in a few weeks. Thank you for your feedback.

 

[linKhehe]

It looks like some template with different text. I am not a fan but can understand why you like it.

Good luck with your server dude.

 

[BOOP]

I found a lot of the text a tad difficult to read (like other people said, the quality is eh). I also didn't like how there was a lot of black space (not like hgbf mentioned, but just around the text I felt like I was just watching a video with a black background and some text.

Also why the old-timey effect? Is that just the theme of the server or..

 

[MarcusG]

I found a lot of the text a tad difficult to read (like other people said, the quality is eh). I also didn't like how there was a lot of black space (not like hgbf mentioned, but just around the text I felt like I was just watching a video with a black background and some text.

Also why the old-timey effect? Is that just the theme of the server or..

Ouch. What do you mean by old-timey effect?

 

[BOOP]

Ouch. What do you mean by old-timey effect?

I don't really know what exactly to call it... but like around the text where you have the old picture effect as if it was an old classic commerical. Does that make sense?

 

[MarcusG]

I don't really know what exactly to call it... but like around the text where you have the old picture effect as if it was an old classic commerical. Does that make sense?

Ohhhh uh, somewhat. I understand what you mean however. Err, not sure.

 

[hgbf]

I don't really know what exactly to call it... but like around the text where you have the old picture effect as if it was an old classic commerical. Does that make sense?

 

[BOOP]

yes sorta like that,
here's a horrible example but on that should help a little bit more:
https://gyazo.com/6c0e0f2db3bdab5f38b44db452cb05f1
The lines and stuff. film grain I think it's called?

 

[MarcusG]

yes sorta like that,
here's a horrible example but on that should help a little bit more:
https://gyazo.com/6c0e0f2db3bdab5f38b44db452cb05f1
The lines and stuff. film grain I think it's called?

Yes I understand what you're talking about. I see what you mean and I can't really explain why it's the way it is for I was not the one who made the trailer.

 

[KelvinZomer]

yes sorta like that,
here's a horrible example but on that should help a little bit more:
https://gyazo.com/6c0e0f2db3bdab5f38b44db452cb05f1
The lines and stuff. film grain I think it's called?

S_FilmDamage[DOUBLEPOST=1545136838][/DOUBLEPOST]

I found a lot of the text a tad difficult to read (like other people said, the quality is eh). I also didn't like how there was a lot of black space (not like hgbf mentioned, but just around the text I felt like I was just watching a video with a black background and some text.

Also why the old-timey effect? Is that just the theme of the server or..

For some reason my render settings auto-enables the "deblocking filter" when I want to render a video. I'm trying to fix it [DOUBLEPOST=1545136933][/DOUBLEPOST]

It looks like some template with different text. I am not a fan but can understand why you like it.

Good luck with your server dude.

It isn't a template, I used S_FilmDamage, S_Flicker and some CC's to make it look nice to watch, but I'll keep this in mind and change it the next time [DOUBLEPOST=1545137107][/DOUBLEPOST]

Can confirm at 1440p.

Also, 6 seconds of black in the beginning makes the first impression of the trailer a bit boring. There are also 5 seconds of this at the end, leaving 50-ish seconds left for the actual trailer. Out of those 50, only 15-20 were in-game footage. I know this is a personal preference, but I would prefer a bit more. The text says that it is a kingdom RPG. In the entire trailer, there's no gameplay showcasing the RPG features.

Nice trailer otherwise! The movement is smooth and looks great.

EDIT: After another look, without full-screen, I saw that 0:19 looks weird even at a small scale. For the rest of the trailer, it's mainly the text and logo that look pixelated.

Thank you for your critism, I know it doesn't look fully 1440p. Some replays are rendered in AE, for some reason I can only select AVI > Makes the final result really pixelated. I don't really know how to fix this yet, but I'm trying to solve it. Also, I thought the incoming blackscreen would make a nice incoming trailer feeling, but I'll keep this in mind and change it the text time [DOUBLEPOST=1545137200][/DOUBLEPOST]

It looks great but considering I was at 1080p, it sure as hell didn't look like it.
Would recommend fixing the quality, too much text and not enough fast pace motion. We want to look at the server.

- Flawws.

I'm working on it , render selection AVI in AE makes it for some reason really pixelated for me, I don't really know why yet.[DOUBLEPOST=1545137340][/DOUBLEPOST]

Very nice.

If you don’t mind me asking, how much was it?
I’m looking into one similar for a different game mode.

https://www.mc-market.org/threads/406929/ You can find all the prices on this page

 

[MarcusG]

You literally took the song but ok cool

That song, yes. But no not from that video. The song I requested to be in the trailer came from

Spoiler: Video

Not my fault the song was made for the public.