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Personally, though I'm not a graphic designer, but I think the design of this falls weak. The overall structure of this falls flat, especially with the single P and use of default fonts that already exist in your computer for "REPROCESS" - it doesn't look like the big letter than the smaller ones belong to each other structurally as a whole.
Even weirder is the fact that the bottom of the long stretch of letters don't line up with the bottom of the P, which is an offset to the balance, as well as how close the thick border is to the R. Composition-wise, it's claustrophobically close.
Like, look at the London 2012 olympics logo - all the numbers are consistent despite the irregularity and it works as a whole. What you've done here is have two contrasting styles and lack of sense of space. It's either one or the other - go with the weird looking text the whole way like what you did with the P, or just go with some default font that's installed on your computer, but probably wouldn't sit well.
Like, when people do logos, if you want to visually communicate the like, brand of the company, usually the logo is the first thing other people see that sorta represents that kind of thing. Ya know, giving the feel the company has. I look at this and I'm like: sooo what the heck is that P supposed to be? Looks like the artist didn't know what they were doing and just slapped random shapes and lines down and hoped it would work. Why does the other text look like they just randomly took some font off word and slapped it on?
Even weirder is the fact that the bottom of the long stretch of letters don't line up with the bottom of the P, which is an offset to the balance, as well as how close the thick border is to the R. Composition-wise, it's claustrophobically close.
Like, look at the London 2012 olympics logo - all the numbers are consistent despite the irregularity and it works as a whole. What you've done here is have two contrasting styles and lack of sense of space. It's either one or the other - go with the weird looking text the whole way like what you did with the P, or just go with some default font that's installed on your computer, but probably wouldn't sit well.
Like, when people do logos, if you want to visually communicate the like, brand of the company, usually the logo is the first thing other people see that sorta represents that kind of thing. Ya know, giving the feel the company has. I look at this and I'm like: sooo what the heck is that P supposed to be? Looks like the artist didn't know what they were doing and just slapped random shapes and lines down and hoped it would work. Why does the other text look like they just randomly took some font off word and slapped it on?
It's like you're a mind reader. That's exactly what I did.[DOUBLEPOST=1478332722][/DOUBLEPOST]I'll start again. Thanks for the feedback.
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I have this now:
It's a bit of a common concept (since it's a hexagon with a hole), but I think it sort of works.
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