Looking for a Management Position [Long Term]
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Note- I am not hiring but I just want to give a few tips on your resume.
For starters, it is way too long. It looks more like an entire job interview rather than a resume. Nobody's going to want to read all that. Although it is necessary for an interview, I suggest removing your "values" entirely (i.e. professionalism, dedication for example.)
Move your experience to the very top, as that is what most people look for when hiring. And instead of leaving that long description for the reader to trudge through, make bullet points. I also suggest removing the part about "And so much more" - it just sounds unprofessional.
Keep "what I have to offer". Maybe add a little description onto each point.
You are experienced, and you seem like a hard-working guy. The first thing people look at, however, is your resume. Keep it short and to the point; no one wants to read an essay. You're asking for a paid position, remember. This means you have to be professional. Try reaching out to some server owners/managers.
That's all I have for you
. Good luck!
For starters, it is way too long. It looks more like an entire job interview rather than a resume. Nobody's going to want to read all that. Although it is necessary for an interview, I suggest removing your "values" entirely (i.e. professionalism, dedication for example.)
Move your experience to the very top, as that is what most people look for when hiring. And instead of leaving that long description for the reader to trudge through, make bullet points. I also suggest removing the part about "And so much more" - it just sounds unprofessional.
Keep "what I have to offer". Maybe add a little description onto each point.
You are experienced, and you seem like a hard-working guy. The first thing people look at, however, is your resume. Keep it short and to the point; no one wants to read an essay. You're asking for a paid position, remember. This means you have to be professional. Try reaching out to some server owners/managers.
That's all I have for you
. Good luck!- Status
