Looking for constructive critique on my edit

[EclipseCinematics]

Hi all,

Edited this 3 min film. Would appreciate some constructive critique so I could improve the look and feel of the film.

 

[Sean]

Insane, I love seeing the stuff you make! Do you get the footage yourself, and if not where from? One of the only things I would change is the text. Perhaps a bolder font with some sort of drop shadow? It blends in too much with the background making it a bit challenging to read. Fantastic work though, looking forward to seeing more of your stuff!

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Insane, I love seeing the stuff you make! Do you get the footage yourself, and if not where from? One of the only things I would change is the text. Perhaps a bolder font with some sort of drop shadow? It blends in too much with the background making it a bit challenging to read. Fantastic work though, looking forward to seeing more of your stuff!

Hello Sean,

Thanks a lot for the very kind words!
So, I've filmed some of the time-lapses (And the protest scene) by myself with my camera, the rest was stock footage (taken from free stock websites, NASA and SpaceX websites.

Thanks also for the critique, ill fix that as soon as I can. Would there be any other suggestions/mistakes you would suggest? I'm trying to refine the finishing product before I make it live (As it will probably be seen by a lot of people on youtube)[DOUBLEPOST=1574605421][/DOUBLEPOST]

Insane, I love seeing the stuff you make! Do you get the footage yourself, and if not where from? One of the only things I would change is the text. Perhaps a bolder font with some sort of drop shadow? It blends in too much with the background making it a bit challenging to read. Fantastic work though, looking forward to seeing more of your stuff!

Oh, and one more thing, do you prefer my first climate change edit, or do you feel like this one is a bit better?

(Link to it for reference: )

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Honest opinion? - I really like the edit, how it looks, sounds, the transitions etc. I feel that all the timings are lined up nicely.
What suggestions would I make? - The only thing I can think of is the font at the beginning, personally I don't think it suits overall. And possibly something added tot he ending, it's quite abrupt.

I'm no videographer, or video editor and so what I say could be plain malarkey, but they're just my thoughts on it Great work.

Excellent, Thanks a lot!

The ending isn't quite finished just yet, but ill add something cool there.