Looking for constructive critique on new edit

[EclipseCinematics]

Hi,

Once again, I'm looking for some opinions on one of my latest edits. This is a "montage" of some sport stock footage I've found of the internet.

I'm looking for opinions on this before I post it to my youtube channel, I need critique on colour grading, shot choices, sound design and story (to an extent)

Link to film:

Thanks!
Philip.

 

[Ender_Bros]

The start and end isn’t excellent (by start I mean before he starts skiing). At the start of the skiing the transitions are not really smooth. And at the rn when you show the credits write what roles they had and make it more lively (the credits section). Overall a great video!
Good luck!

 

[EclipseCinematics]

The start and end isn’t excellent (by start I mean before he starts skiing). At the start of the skiing the transitions are not really smooth. And at the rn when you show the credits write what roles they had and make it more lively (the credits section). Overall a great video!
Good luck!

Excellent. Will revise. Thanks[DOUBLEPOST=1586544776][/DOUBLEPOST][REVISED]

 

[Ender_Bros]

Can we see the new video?

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Can we see the new video?

Ive updated the link

 

[Rock]

Transitions arent the smoothest and they are kinda fast and unrelated. Could just be me though.

 

[Visualry]

The transitions are pretty good but not that seamless. Also, the audio tracks are imbalance, the sfx are too loud over the main music. I suggest try to search and learn the different db's used for different audios like dialogues, sfx, and music. But overall, you have the potential of making sick videos in the future!

 

[EclipseCinematics]

The transitions are pretty good but not that seamless. Also, the audio tracks are imbalance, the sfx are too loud over the main music. I suggest try to search and learn the different db's used for different audios like dialogues, sfx, and music. But overall, you have the potential of making sick videos in the future!

Thanks, will try to revise.[DOUBLEPOST=1586616535][/DOUBLEPOST]

The transitions are pretty good but not that seamless. Also, the audio tracks are imbalance, the sfx are too loud over the main music. I suggest try to search and learn the different db's used for different audios like dialogues, sfx, and music. But overall, you have the potential of making sick videos in the future!

Transitions arent the smoothest and they are kinda fast and unrelated. Could just be me though.

Can we see the new video?

Timeline if anyone interested