Looking for critique on my first mc edit!

[EclipseCinematics]

Hello MCM

Im looking for critique for my first ever MC edit.

A link to the edit can be found here: (Adobe cloud storage) https://adobe.ly/2G90YG9

Again, Kind critique would be warmly welcomed in the comments of this thread!

 

[EclipseCinematics]

It's not finished yet, there are quite a few things i still need to do, im just looking for critisim to add and improve on that render

 

[Hannes]

Why is it the definition of speed?

 

[Kavish]

I think the speed was nice.

The beginning was a little unnecessary and I think if you did the shots on the arena it would have been cooler. The white screen that flash was weird and I think you can replace it with a better color or pattern. When PVPing, keep all of the UI off other than the hotbar and crosshairs. You edits were really good otherwise. If you find your style, they will start to come out really good.

 

[Cletus O Rien]

its just presets added onto sped up clips, not really satisfying to watch. all of the cinematics also feel super linear, im assuming they were just 2 keyframes in replaymod?

 

[Carrson]

pretty good, figure out how time remapping works and ur set.

 

[IMakeYouLag]

Add time remap to sync up with the beats (There are AE tutorials on that), and also when possible, add a slow shake when you pan around big builds. And add more keyframes and points when using replay mod.

But overall its a good first edit!