Looking for feedback v2

[FelixDev]

Hello MC-Market, Today I am back with some changes on my own website since last time. Changed color added 2 sections etc.

NOTE - The loading issue should still be a problem but I am working on a fix soon, its not responsive yet either!

https://devfelix.com/

Take a look and leave your feedback down below !
Have a great day!

 

[rida]

Increase margins on larger displays, usually you set a max width of the full content body container and center it in the middle of the screen to get it consistent and responsive. Text like the About Me fails the contrast, and it doesn't really make sense to offset the "Who is FelixDev" because it's really short and looks poorly aligned.

On the paragraph text, you're failing any contrast tests, and need to make the text more readable by adjusting the letter-spacing, and line-height.

I would remove the italics on the hero, and personally not a huge fan of that font. Feels like I'm staring at a Google Doc.

I would actually completely do away with about me, and add that under the hero to explain a little bit about yourself. You need to be quick, and precise. What's your name, how long have you been doing relevant skills, do away with the fluff.

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ALSO, DO NOT TALK ABOUT YOUR LACK OF MOTIVATION WHEN YOU'RE TRYING TO SELL YOURSELF, talking about one of the items in your portfolio. lol

 

[FelixDev]

Increase margins on larger displays, usually you set a max width of the full content body container and center it in the middle of the screen to get it consistent and responsive. Text like the About Me fails the contrast, and it doesn't really make sense to offset the "Who is FelixDev" because it's really short and looks poorly aligned.

On the paragraph text, you're failing any contrast tests, and need to make the text more readable by adjusting the letter-spacing, and line-height.

I would remove the italics on the hero, and personally not a huge fan of that font. Feels like I'm staring at a Google Doc.

I would actually completely do away with about me, and add that under the hero to explain a little bit about yourself. You need to be quick, and precise. What's your name, how long have you been doing relevant skills, do away with the fluff.

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ALSO, DO NOT TALK ABOUT YOUR LACK OF MOTIVATION WHEN YOU'RE TRYING TO SELL YOURSELF, talking about one of the items in your portfolio. lol

Thanks for your honest feedback, I will consider changing font but I actually like it, I feel it's modern simple and that's how I want it actually. But on the line-height and letter spacing, I will do have a look at because I've seen that the text can be hard to read for some people so I will check into that!

For the "lack of motivation", Northsite was my own project that I tried to create with a friend, I was the only developer & felt that when school started I didn't have time to actually register it as a Swedish company & that's where the lack of motivation came in,

 

[HaMoOoOd25]

The idea of the design and color selection overall is great. You just need to work a little on aligning the text. Also as mentioned above, you should fix the contrast so the text becomes more readable. I would also suggest if you speed up the animation of the contact drop-down because it feels a bit slow. Good luck

 

[rida]

Thanks for your honest feedback, I will consider changing font but I actually like it, I feel it's modern simple and that's how I want it actually. But on the line-height and letter spacing, I will do have a look at because I've seen that the text can be hard to read for some people so I will check into that!

For the "lack of motivation", Northsite was my own project that I tried to create with a friend, I was the only developer & felt that when school started I didn't have time to actually register it as a Swedish company & that's where the lack of motivation came in,

Sure thing, I'm not saying don't get unmotivated for your products. I'm saying, as someone who has both designed websites, developed websites, and hired designers and developers to make my websites, this is something questionable that would guarantee you as a lost client. The design is good, just drop the mention of the lack of motivation because it doesn't matter and the only thing it does is make you look worse.