Looking for opinions/critique on my edit

[EclipseCinematics]

Hi all,

Today om looking for some critique on one my videos on climate change.

The areas I'm looking on critique are the storyline, Editorial concept, Colour grading and audio editing.

Link to the video Here

 

[EclipseCinematics]

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Thank you, although I'd like to have some critique here

 

[Lucian929]

Great video. Only recommendation: Change "Deforistation" to "Deforestation" at the beginning of the video.[DOUBLEPOST=1573355256][/DOUBLEPOST]

Great video. Only recommendation: Change "Deforistation" to "Deforestation" at the beginning of the video.

1 other small issue: I thought it was a little weird when I saw the lightning, seemed to just be there, and for no reason. I wouldn't say lightning has to do with climate change etc, maybe im wrong.

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Great video. Only recommendation: Change "Deforistation" to "Deforestation" at the beginning of the video.[DOUBLEPOST=1573355256][/DOUBLEPOST]
1 other small issue: I thought it was a little weird when I saw the lightning, seemed to just be there, and for no reason. I wouldn't say lightning has to do with climate change etc, maybe im wrong.

Thanks a lot, your critique means a lot. Ill fix that ASAP