Looking for some feedback on some graphics work!

[Bdog]

Hello MCM,

I encourage you to take a look at some example pieces of my work, which I may open a shop for, and offer me some positive feedback or some negative/ constructive criticism on my work.

Link to the section of my portfolio to focus on (Other things are old and are going to be updated): https://bdog.carbonmade.com/projects/6188999

Regards,
Bdog

 

[Sphry]

they all look really nice, keep up the good work.

 

[MyNameIsAres]

The lighting/shading could be improved. Besides that they all look fantastic and you're on the right path.

 

[Sparko]

looks really nice, I like the texture you used on the render, just change the font in your thread design to something more readable and it'll be sexy af

 

[StealWonders]

I find those two banners of yours really sweet looking. Though you could maybe add some more effects to the smoke on the blue one and maybe add some gfx to the sides of the orange banner. If you are into animating you could really make that personal "ad" of yours really pop out - You could achieve this by making your slogan "wiggle" or make it move a bit & transition another text into the scene containing contact information or your pricing.
The two logos of yours are simply sleek & simple - Not everyone might like that. Try to make it more eye-catching maybe. The last logo (blue and purple) still needs a lot of improvement. Add some shadows and maybe some contrast color behind & before the background and the text on the logo. Add a text border with white maybe.
These are some things I had to point out while I was looking at your artwork - It still looks really great though, never the less

 

[Bdog]

Thank you all for your replies and suggestions on how I can improve. It was only the first 3 images (2 banners and a render) in there at first but I added the other work to show someone. It's great to have feedback on all of this work though.

looks really nice, I like the texture you used on the render, just change the font in your thread design to something more readable and it'll be sexy af

Up close the white font in fine on the thread design, Carbonmade has to shrink it so it looks weird. Thanks for the feedback!

 

[Ben_M]

Very Nice!

 

[jackskate]

Pretty awesome! Love the pulse

 

[thatsprettygewd]

Both of them looks really neat and clean. I can tell that you put a considerable amount of work into them.

 

[will_the_warrior]

Impressive, I like 'em!

 

[Lehend]

me like it xD