[Mango] 2D Intro || First Ever Intro [Need Feedback]

[Mango]

So, I basically just got After Effects CC today, and made this quick little 2D intro with some references. I was wondering if anybody could give me some feedback on this. .

 

[COD]

For a first, that's not bad. I'd work on your text transitions, but everything else looks nice.

 

[Clutterz]

Holy moly my volume was at full with earphones and it broke my eardrums... Great except the part where mango comes up is not the best, maybe you should say mango in a cooler font and a bit smaller.... Also wrong section, there is one specifically for feedback...

 

[Mango]

Just made my third ever intro! Also, the second one is here as well.
Jkaay you might want to check out the third one, I made it in a really nice font. .

 

[Bryce]

So, I basically just got After Effects CC today, and made this quick little 2D intro with some references. I was wondering if anybody could give me some feedback on this. .

I like them, I would work on integrating your music more closely with the actual video itself. Syncing it with music drops and what not.

 

[Mango]

I like them, I would work on integrating your music more closely with the actual video itself. Syncing it with music drops and what not.

I'll definitely be syncing the music when I start doing 3D intros for sure, I can try and do it with 2D but it'll be a bit weirder.

 

[Bryce]

I'll definitely be syncing the music when I start doing 3D intros for sure, I can try and do it with 2D but it'll be a bit weirder.

I like a guy who can take criticism without being offended. Good job. Keep up the great work