MCFinance | Partners and More!
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Found a small error here, other than that best of luck with the company. On a side note, have you invested any money yourself? I'm not particularly interested but was curious none the less.
Regards,
Risk
Thank you for the information Risk and yes, I would be funding the company through out my ownership. I have already handled the graphic designs and website, the only funds that we get from our partners would go into advertisements!
Hello Hairold,
A few days ago you contacted me regarding a staff position, then pulled out your offer in a slightly audacious manner. To show you that everybody makes spelling errors, I've returned the favour to you. Here are some places where you can improve you thread grammatically. Hopefully, it will allow you to understand not to make judgements on a business based on a single sentence. As if you should, you really need to start judging your own business.
several services like financial recoverage [insurance], loans,
"Recoverage" is not a word that exists in the English dictionary.
packages to choose from with different prices, ranking from low to high.
Bad context for the word "ranking".
What's the guarantee of my return in investment?
"on" would be correct English.
We have several plans made to insure our profit financially
You probably aren't taking out an insurance on your profit, your probably taking measures to ensure success.
How does that statement secures my profit?
An individual statement is not plural.
allowed to provide funds to the company if MCFinance have not paid
Wrong grammar, has (sing.) not paid.
been payed with a certain amount of profit.
Basic spelling error, instead of paid.
A few days ago you contacted me regarding a staff position, then pulled out your offer in a slightly audacious manner. To show you that everybody makes spelling errors, I've returned the favour to you. Here are some places where you can improve you thread grammatically. Hopefully, it will allow you to understand not to make judgements on a business based on a single sentence. As if you should, you really need to start judging your own business.
several services like financial recoverage [insurance], loans,
"Recoverage" is not a word that exists in the English dictionary.
packages to choose from with different prices, ranking from low to high.
Bad context for the word "ranking".
What's the guarantee of my return in investment?
"on" would be correct English.
We have several plans made to insure our profit financially
You probably aren't taking out an insurance on your profit, your probably taking measures to ensure success.
How does that statement secures my profit?
An individual statement is not plural.
allowed to provide funds to the company if MCFinance have not paid
Wrong grammar, has (sing.) not paid.
been payed with a certain amount of profit.
Basic spelling error, instead of paid.
Ah, thank you for your help, it is greatly appreciated by our team! I see you might have had some reading errors while we were discussing about your server. I, Hairold, was stating that, my first impression ,towards your server ,was not very good. We understand that you lack maturity which resulted in your actions to take revenge. We did not know this would affect you as much since we thought you would receive criticism positively. We were not referring to your staff's grammar mistake rather to the staff team's behavior. As they say, everyone would learn eventually and we from MCFinance believe that your level of professionalism and maturity would eventually increase by years past! Once again, we would like to thank you for helping us in fixing our grammatical mistakes that were made in our thread! We are also happy if you have got satisfaction from your actions since our motive is to satisfy our customers too!
Regards,
Hairold
[ We would not be replying to your reply statements unless it benefits our company through any way ]
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