Minecraft Mob - Dragon

[Epic]

Hey,

So this is the first time I made a mob, it didnt took my a while just did this in 1 hour and I wanted to share with you guys. It will be an open link for the people who want to download this dragon. If you have any tips or things that I could use and practise on please reply below I need those tips because its my first ever mob build, oh and you can criticise if you want dont mind it because its usefull

Screens:


Download link:

I will post the link tommorow since the owner of the build server isnt online atm will leave a reply with the link

 

[CrimsonKM]

In my opinion, hand built looks way better. While I'm not an expert at statues myself, I can still critisize because I know how they should look. In my opinion the head is a bit lacking, oddly shaped. It seems to look like you used voxel sniper or worldedit brushes, which in some cases can be extremely good, but in my opinion, unless you are very skilled it it, statues shouldn't be built by them. Work on the pose a bit, and if you need to use a reference picture of a dragon to really get a feel for it. Before everyone calls out on me, he even said he welcomed constructive criticism and he received. I understand this is your first statue and is pretty good considering. Keep making them and you'll get better. Keep going, that's potential

 

[Bienyyy]

Try to smooth out some edges and i dont mean you should equip a smooth brush and go crazy with it but rather look at it from afar, think about the shape the certain part of the organic should have and just place some blocks where you think it looks too blocky. Repeat until youre happy with the result. Using worldedit is totally fine. What i normally do is i make like a lined frame of gold blocks and give it shape with a WE brush. Then smooth it out the way i explained earlier and add sone detail.
All in all its still decent for your first organic and giving it away for free is nice of you.

 

[SaintSage]

Nice build but what they said above should be taking into consideration.
Appreciate you making it for free, generous of you regardless.

 

[Epic]

here is the download link http://www.mediafire.com/download/blfp199e4cck7f4/dragon.schematic

and feel free to edit it and show the results of it maybe I can see in the pictures what I possibly can improve

 

[Marth]

This is definitely good for a first-timer (at least when it comes to mobs). I look forward to seeing future builds from you.

 

[Epic]

Could I use this on my server? Planning to have it perched up on the side of our pvp arena Thanks

ofc no problem