Minecraft Trailer

[GlitchGalore]

I made this trailer for my friend's upcoming server, it's pretty short. I don't have much experience in server trailers, and only have made about 2 a while back before this. I would like feedback and constructive criticism on how I can improve.

 

[Sadler]

Looks good man.

 

[Jeyger]

Since I make trailers myself, I suggest cut back on the rolls like alot. An example would be at the very beginning of the trailer. Either than that its pretty good. Good syncing with the music; also suggest using new fonts like Couture is a good one[DOUBLEPOST=1518853960][/DOUBLEPOST]Since I make trailers myself, I suggest cut back on the rolls like alot. An example would be at the very beginning of the trailer. Either than that its pretty good. Good syncing with the music; also suggest using new fonts like Couture is a good one

 

[reachforheaven]

A bit too many dutch angles IMO and the "Temity Factions Presents" credit lasts for a bit too long at ~16 seconds. I also think more setting shots/landscape shots would be interesting, though that may be a limitation with the view distance / hardware used while recording.

Also, it's maybe a bit heavy on the vibrant oranges from the sunset and nether. Try mixing it with more variety in time of day and colour palette.

Other than that the text, transitions and music are really clean so the rest is pretty subjective. Good work.

 

[UF0]

Camera path is too curvey, and I'm not a fan of the text. Would also recommend trying a new shaders pack. Good luck!

 

[GlitchGalore]

Camera path is too curvey, and I'm not a fan of the text. Would also recommend trying a new shaders pack. Good luck!

which one do you recommend?