Montage Feedback?

[Enjin]

Hey all, I have recently started making montages and was wondering if I could get some feedback, I would like to know what I could improve on, and if making montages could be a server that I offer for people to buy. Also, appraise how much per video I could charge for a montage. Any feedback or whatever would help me tons, thank you!

 

[Rezend]

I like it man

 

[TemMer]

First montage you linked) Not bad but, I prefered to add like some velo (speed to the clip), make more p/c (pan & crop) so you make some kinda of cool bumps at the drops, the other is cool and, the song is not the best.
Second montage you linked) Needs more improvements..the cc is not the best, no velo, no p/c and all those cuts are not that good, you need to find the right spot (when it bump or something) and add some smooth transiction at the end/start of the clip when you change the scene.
Hope I helped you

(I was an editor of mineraft pvp so..I know how it works etc.. )

 

[Enjin]

First montage you linked) Not bad but, I prefered to add like some velo (speed to the clip), make more p/c (pan & crop) so you make some kinda of cool bumps at the drops, the other is cool and, the song is not the best.
Second montage you linked) Needs more improvements..the cc is not the best, no velo, no p/c and all those cuts are not that good, you need to find the right spot (when it bump or something) and add some smooth transiction at the end/start of the clip when you change the scene.
Hope I helped you

(I was an editor of mineraft pvp so..I know how it works etc.. )

Thank for, I will keep this in mind

I, have no idea how that works and thought it may have had too much of a red tiny, but I love how in the second one, the song's drop was when you killed someone with perfect timing, that was great.

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

 

[Rockroff]

Liked it!